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October 16, 2015
half-centennial by AlloenDreams is a raw, poignant, and powerful piece of writing that avoids the cushioning we sometimes want to use when speaking of grief.
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i thought i had grief down to an art:
throw the ashes to the wind,
catch them in your mouth,
and move on
but i can't work through this
as if it were a checklist
loss is not linear,
a recipe reading:
simmer in sorrow, sadness, anger
until it is reduced by half,
a glaze of grief
at the bottom of the pan
my doctor can keep
his Kubler-Ross model,
give her five stages
another five years
because i am not finished
tearing at my shirt,
painting mascara Roschorch
on my pillowcase,
letting my blood
of the oxygen we both breathed
i hear the respirators
when the rest of the house is asleep
your funeral flowers still
hang in the rafters of the attic,
raining down on me in the summer heat
i stare at pictures of you
as old as i am now, to try and
remember your living face
the cadence of the songs you sung
the line of freckles beach sun left
on the underside of your tired eyes
this life is punctuated
by two days alone:
the day your heart began beating
and the day it stopped
and acceptance reads
like the closing of a chapter,
the cessation of a cycle,
that time says ended
six years ago
throw the ashes to the wind,
catch them in your mouth,
and move on
but i can't work through this
as if it were a checklist
loss is not linear,
a recipe reading:
simmer in sorrow, sadness, anger
until it is reduced by half,
a glaze of grief
at the bottom of the pan
my doctor can keep
his Kubler-Ross model,
give her five stages
another five years
because i am not finished
tearing at my shirt,
painting mascara Roschorch
on my pillowcase,
letting my blood
of the oxygen we both breathed
i hear the respirators
when the rest of the house is asleep
your funeral flowers still
hang in the rafters of the attic,
raining down on me in the summer heat
i stare at pictures of you
as old as i am now, to try and
remember your living face
the cadence of the songs you sung
the line of freckles beach sun left
on the underside of your tired eyes
this life is punctuated
by two days alone:
the day your heart began beating
and the day it stopped
and acceptance reads
like the closing of a chapter,
the cessation of a cycle,
that time says ended
six years ago
Literature
gravedigger
dear sarah,
i wonder
if sometimes you can still feel the weight of your bed sheet
around your neck. heaven knows there were days i could count every thread.
last night i was cleaning up my desk, and i found the scissors
i used to crack my skin open four years ago
and when i went to throw them out, it felt like moving mountains
or graves. if you don’t know yet, you’ll learn that some types of grief
leave scars—some ghosts don’t know how to stay buried.
you will stumble through the rest of your life wondering if you will
one day forget how it feels to toe the edge of the cliff and turn the other way.
the answer is no
Literature
Hospital Poetry: Half Moons
Our favourite nurse brings us
nail polishes gift-wrapped
on Christmas day
to brighten up the white-washed crescent beds
of our hands
that limply
match the pale walls of the ward.
I choose silver stardust
reminiscent of tinsel
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Fading eyelashes
In his heart of hearts,
the husband knew she would always fear
the home,
would always fear
retiring from the desk in charge,
would always be
the nun who would excommunicate
all popes and priests,
-the heretical demons!-
who would grow up to gush
at her friends who married
blond, clear looking foreigners
-while she is stuck in her
cold too cold hot too hot
rainy too rainy country
He forgot to tell
his secretary
to not answer his
home phone
but at least he
lost himself in another city
in another job
other children
another time
unshackled of everything
unclouded of everything
perhaps he is lounging
in the mountains
with his new children
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this felt unfinished, until i realized the whole point was how unending this all is. i can't finish it.
you would have been fifty tomorrow. i’m skipping all my classes to scream out on jetties and let salt settle in my hair because the word mom, mother, burns through me right now. the loss is too raw again, and these aren’t even the right words to explain it.
i wish it had been me. i wish i were with you. i wish i had just done it six years ago. i don’t feel safe in this skin that is half yours. those, i suppose, are closer.
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Oh. My. Word.
It seems we are cut of one cloth.
This is older, but I've been telling people for years that grief is by no means a "linear" process.
It seems we are cut of one cloth.
This is older, but I've been telling people for years that grief is by no means a "linear" process.
The World Pardons Not a Broken HeartThe world keeps turning, though I'm not sure how;
the angle of the afternoon sun continues shifting,
and my loneliness grows more and more acute.
We should be walking the streets together, hand in hand,
but instead, I face the start of a new chapter
without him by my side.
And though in his absence I have trudged forth,
I feel my heart dragging a few paces behind.
Some people say to move on,
others to stay put and mend my wounds.
Which advice should I heed?
Some say that because I have hope,
I am being unhealthy.
I am in denial.
But what have I, if I have not hope?
I would be living a lie if I said
that I weren't wishing for things to be as they once were.
And yet, I feel less and less like I can be myself around others.
"It's okay to cry," they say one moment.
"Dry your tears," they say the next.
It seems no one understands
that grief is by no means a linear process.